i´m not gonna write about the plusses, because you probably know about them. but i will try to give you a constructive critic. the devices, like flash drive, sim card and mp3player could be somehow space-transformed...you know, we are lookin at it from 0degrees angle. play with it a bit.the face is not corresponding with the background to me. imo you should blur the edges a litle or something like that, it´s your work.
except of this two litttle i like it a lot. and concet is good too

peace

woah! that's long, well I get your point, for me i just want to emphasize the important things to convey what I'm trying to say about my work, that's why I never thought of that, thanks for your suggestion anyways, good luck. I guess I don't have a chance on this competition, since nobody bothers to see my work as a promising one, I'm just totally underrated, a lot of peeps say that about me,hehehe, well i think i have to try and try and try til i die =)

All the separate objects in the composition are well excecuted, but they don't seem to work together..
Try to find something that puts everything together....and please don't die
(you can look very angry btw)

they don't seem to work together ? i'm sure they have a connection,but they have the same use, to store data, from sim card, you store all info for communication, but the whole sim card signifies the whole cellphone, i'm just emphasizing all the small things here, then from a cellphone you can transfer music to an Mp3 player then from the mp3 player you can transfer music to a USB thumb drive and carry it with you to pass it on to another data storage and so on, that's what I'm trying to convey here, i know this things cuz i'm part of it and i did the same thing as this one,hehe. The face represents an empowered data generation,different races, different colors, who can spread his or her thoughts to people who would be happy to recieve them, it looks angry cuz in today's generation angst and rage of something or someone can be done thru a poem or a song, and this could give others to feel what you feel and believe that someone out there is just like you , i hope I made it all clear here,hehehe, tnx for your time peeps, peace!

i have voted kris! it is nicely done! it is well done! =)

hahaha, thanks ann =)

I like the scream! Good luck to the contest

thanks anastasia! =)